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Bullet; Green First page
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I'm moving tomorrow so I'm busyyy but here's a page for you!
Edit: Removed some speech bubbles hoho. 

And I got this, thank you:
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Myrkin Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2017
I started reading your comic today and now I find myself at this page. I will certainly be looking forward to seeing more of this comic. The story is pretty dark and interesting so far. I only hope it won't turn into "If you think this has a happy ending, you haven't been paying attention." kind of dark. ;)
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Detrah Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2017  Student Digital Artist
63 pages in one day! That's amazing, thank you for reading. 

I updated just now, more coming as soon as possible! I hope you'll enjoy future pages and the eventual ending. :aww:
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Myrkin Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2017
What can I say? I like stories with rabbits. :)

That's great to hear! ^^
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Dakaido Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh man, this is amazing!
Please continue!
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Detrah Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! I will! 
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LunarWolf1994 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know you have had problems with your hard drive and all, but I am beginng you to continue working on this comic. It has taken me 30 min to fall in love with this comic, art and story. The emotions it evokes are overwhelming. :)
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Detrah Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2017  Student Digital Artist
It's been rough. I'm continuing though, I updated just now actually! I promise I won't stop until it's all finished. :) 

Thank you so much, I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far! 
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Alichzy72 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh man, I just started reading this today and I'm already hooked.

I love how you've gotten me and so many hooked on a plot that revolves around an ominous hol in the ground. Not some overly complex plot, just a hole in the ground. It takes some fantastic writing a story telling to get so many people interested in a hole.
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Detrah Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Ah geez, thank you! Sorry for the hiatus the comic has been on.

Thank you so much, that's so kind of you to say and it means a lot to me! 
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Alichzy72 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No problem, I know all of us have to take a break at some point.


You are very welcome. C:
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Iittleprince Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2017
This is literally my favourite webcomic ever ;;
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Detrah Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Oh wow, thank you! ;_;
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FluffyMarshmallow Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
WHEN. NEXT. PAGE.
I dont wanna be pressuring you we just really have been waiting for a while
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Detrah Featured By Owner Edited Jan 12, 2017  Student Digital Artist
I lost all the upcoming pages for this chapter when my hard drive broke, and it's really tough to get myself to redraw it all, especially after I just did it and was happy with the outcome. To do it all again, trying to remember what solutions I came up with, what I changed, and then drawing all of it feels like too much. 

I just feel really sad and disappointed when I think about it, so I've been putting it off. I'll try to get back to it as soon as I can though. 
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Japani69Katti Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
minulle kävi juuri näin oman sarjakuvani kanssa juuri viime viikolla :D
tikku meni paskaks yht'äkkiä ja kaikki 10 sivua valmista sarjakuvaa jota en olllut vielä mihkään postannut katosi yhy
I know your pain x_x
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Detrah Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Joo sillee KIITOS oliko pakko. :) Ikävä kyllä kuulla että on kohtalontoveri, mielummi ei kävis kenellekää muulle näi. :D
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DamienMuerte Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh noes"!  That is really really really sad! D:    It even kills me when that happens in a RPG Post, for what I sit around half an hour, but loosing pages of drawing which cost much time and effort, thats heartbreaking =( Sorry to hear that,  hugging you =(  

Your comic is gorgeous, please dont give it up because of that ._.   But take your time to come over the "OH CRAP!!"  feeling.  
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Detrah Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2017  Student Digital Artist
It's awful! I try not to think about the comic at all because I feel so sad thinking about all the lost files, but I can't put it off forever. And I don't want to! 

Thank you! I promise I won't quit. I just need to kinda detach myself from the pages that I lost, so that I'll be able to draw them again without comparing them to what they used to be. I'll get back to it as soon as I can! 
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DamienMuerte Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*carefullypokes*   do you get better, honey?  =)  Sorry to bother you... just cant bear the thought you really put it aside... its such a gorgeous comic, it would be so sad to loose it because what happened.. =(   I check back at it every week <3    I love poor bunny and Im starving to know whats in the Pit =D   (I bet its my daughter. She loves bunny meat. )  
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Detrah Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2017  Student Digital Artist
I'd never put it aside! I'll finish it, I promise. 

I uploaded a new page just now actually. :) The updates might be slow for now, but they will be coming, so don't worry. 

Thanks for the support! Now I'm kinda scared it actually IS your daughter in there. 
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DamienMuerte Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yayyyy!!  *freakydances* =D  

Oh yeah, she definitely is...  though she loves the bunnies without the fur... XD   Really, its scary what kids are capable of, if they grow up with it.  I grew up, knowing, bunnies are for our dinner.  I got to choose one I could keep and I got promised it wont ever be eaten.  That bunny was my best friend and died aged 10 years old.  He was so old he lost his hair all over snout and back XD   
My daughter grew up, seeing mommy drain the fur from bunnies.  She knows a animal has to die if she wants to eat meat.  Many people are mean and cant understand why she has to see such things. (Well it was her choice, nobody forced her to look.)  I think its better that way, at least she knows.  She still loves bunny meat. She had the opportunity to have a pet bunny. We had a small little dwarf bunny just for her.  She cared so much about him, that she asked if its not hers when we had bunny. That was all. He didnt get old, (sadly?),  and when he died, she didnt notice for 4 whole weeks.  Then she saw he wasnt here anymore, and started to cry. I said "stop crying. He died so long ago and you didnt notice, but now.  Seeing you didnt care to look at him ONCE in a month, you have no right to cry for him."    Yep, I was mad about it, but shes still only 6.  (she cares for our chicken far more...  that chick wont die even If I stop caring for it right now.  She ran dozens of times to the chicken, right forth and back from the empty bunny-cage she didnt notice,    xD  Guess she stopped "loving" bunnies as pets because she loves to eat them more... XD )  
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FluffyMarshmallow Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, I'm so sorry...
And don't worry, you're an awesome artist and whatever you do will be great!
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Japani69Katti Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
tämä on niin hyvä idea käyttää vain kolmea väriä :D
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Detrah Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Kiitos! :) 
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demonchild19me Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this art style, it give the whole comic an eerie feel, and it sets the mood very well. Poor EarBun >n< I want to hug him so badly! Keep up the good work Detrah! Can't wait for the new page!
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Detrah Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thanks! Sorry it's taken so long to update! But I'm working on it. 
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demonchild19me Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
It's ok, I know it takes a while to create these great comics! Good work, keep it up >w<
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superpeppepower Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Man, this writing is amazing. And the art style is gorgeous, it really fits the mood and holds so much emotion with it even if it's simplistic. I just discovered this comic this afternoon and I'm in love. Please continue!!
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Detrah Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! Glad you like it! 

I'm totally gonna continue, working on some pages right now. :) I'll try to resume weekly updates soon. 
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superpeppepower Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahh yay!! Super excited!
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FluffyMarshmallow Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
yes he did
it was just a fucking PIT
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Detrah Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016  Student Digital Artist
DAMN.
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FluffyMarshmallow Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Ouch
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Guadisaves02 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2016  Student General Artist
of course he wont :C
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Detrah Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Of course!
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Lady-Kyndle Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is where doubt meets faith, apparently. Poor Bun just wants a reason, something that makes sense, given how alone he feels. He put his faith in a friend, only to realize that said friend was causing him to "sin against" their usual way of life. However, he's part of the system, and is so brainwashed into thinking that the hole has to mean SOMETHING that he's willing to postpone his freedom just to find an answer. This is no different than a person asking for proof that God exists, and struggling hard to keep the faith when no real answer presents itself.

It does make you wonder what the hole is even for, though. Yes, at it's base, it can be considered population control, but who's directing it? Does the hole itself demand a daily sacrifice, or is that something that the rabbits at the top of the hierarchy made up? If it's the latter, what's the real purpose? What's at the bottom of the hole? Also noteworthy is the fact that Spot hasn't actually LEFT despite believing that the hole is nothing more than a ploy. If he knows that, then why stay at all? Nothing is holding him back. He doesn't really seem attached to anyone else in the group. Perhaps he's like our main bun, and is simply too afraid to leave on his own? Maybe that's why he showed him this "truth" to try and convince him to leave together. Obviously, that backfired. 

Seems like our Bun is going on a very long journey of discovery, both of self and of his own beliefs. I hope he has the strength to endure whatever he decides to do!
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Detrah Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016  Student Digital Artist
It's difficult, these things. Especially with brother being a part of it too. 

You're asking good questions! I'm excited to see you wondering especially some of them. Not telling you which ones..! Certainly didn't see this as a page to get people thinking, so I'm really (pleasantly) surprised! It's so fun to read all this. 

Thanks for writing such a thoughtful comment!
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samayooo Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016
wdf these deep comments tho

meanwhile im just

SOMEONE HUG THIS POOR BUN qqqqq
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Detrah Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016  Student Digital Artist
People getting deep! Lovely!

People who want to hug the bun are also very lovely. Keep it up!
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OddyDot Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I must say, I really liked the depressed/empty/silent/terrified feel of the last few pages and I expected that mood to be carried through for a bit, which I would encourage still! I think there is a lot of power in what is unsaid, Bunny was stunned in his/her own fear, and we understood completely how the bunny felt without these blunt speech bubbles from little bun in this page, so I have to say I sort of changed my view on the mood and his reaction of terror (while he is more somber here.) I just found myself needing to adjust a little. I didnt expect him to collect himself just yet and question the situation. Just a small critique for the character development! Hope it didn't offend you! This comic has a very special place in my heart and every update is exciting
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Detrah Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Oh I see! I must say though, I feel like there wasn't that much silence in the last pages, with our buns arguing and yelling at to each other. Or maybe you mean when bun goes back inside again?

Well, despite me maybe disagreeing (or misunderstanding), with you mentioning silence I started to think that maybe the first two panels could be silent. So I decided to do that! That may not be what you were after, but to me it feels better already. :) So thanks for sharing your thoughts! 
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wolflover1451 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016
Poor bun
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Detrah Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Yes.
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wolflover1451 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016
i want to hug him
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WLDN Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016
Everything goes so bad for the poor bunbun D;
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Detrah Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016  Student Digital Artist
For real! 
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Korpikuu Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I still refuse to believe his brother actually jumped in the pit! >:C
A happy reunion, that's what I'd love to see. ;__;
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Detrah Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Ohh that would be the best. ;_;
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SkekLa Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2016  Professional General Artist
I hope Earbun does give Eyebun's logic a thought, at least!...
He has seen now, that things might not quite be as the ones from the rabbit hole say...
But he has grown hearing and learning things in taht way, worshippig and fearing the Pit...and i will be hard for him to even consider the existence of a different truth...
Poor Earbun..
We all wonder what was his Brother's true fate...

EXCELLENT PAGE!
I am completely immersed in this comic... :la:
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Detrah Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Let's hope so! Like you said, it must be hard though. 

Oh that's great to hear. <3 
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