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Abyss - 10 [End] by Detrah Abyss - 10 [End] by Detrah
And here comes the fox! And with him, the end of the comic.

I hope you liked the comic. `v´ Drawing these bunnies is always a pleasure. Don't worry if you find the story a bit hard to understand, that's fine! If you have any questions, I'll gladly answer.

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Sky-Lily Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
... Well that was just depressing. ):
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Detrah Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Student Digital Artist
:c WELL I hope you like depressing because there will be more where this came from. òwó
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AmyNChan Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
o.o

poor bunny....
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:icondetrah:
Detrah Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Yeah.. o n o
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AmyNChan Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So do many of the bunnies know of the conspiracy?
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:icondetrah:
Detrah Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I would say 5-7, but I'm not sure. : D
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AmyNChan Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
dun dun DUUUN!!  THE GREAT BUNNY CONSPIRACY!!!  XDD
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StarInTheDarkness Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, this comic is amazing! I really like your art style!
And this is proof that something doesn't have to be long to be amazing. You were able to convey a really powerful message in only ten pages.
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Detrah Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! I'm glad you feel that way. 

I actually used to feel like comics were supposed to be like +200 pages long since the webcomics I knew were like that. But I'd rather be able to finish my comics! 
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Ferrii Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Hobbyist
Oi että, kylläpä pisti sanattomaksi!
Oot tosi taitava tällaisissa, hyvää työtä!!:aww:
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:icondetrah:
Detrah Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oaa, ihanaa. u//v//u Kiva että pidit. 
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Keesness Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
fff this was lovely <3
Very dark,
it hurt my heart to read because of the horrible only decision to make,
and the stupidity and selfishness of the mayority,
and OH MY GOD I WANT A SEQUEL SO BAD <3

Thank you for sharing this ;u; <3
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Detrah Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist

I would like to express how your comment made me feel, but I'm not as good with words as you seem to be! But thank you, I feel like you really understood this little comic. u v u 

There is a sequel indeed! I'm just hesitant to post it. 

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Keesness Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahh, i'm glad i got across how much i love this,
both the execution and the message behind it <3
You're very welcome <3

Ah, why?
//am dying to see it xD
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Detrah Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Because I'd like it to be longer. `v´
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Keesness Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah, but good doesn't equal longer!
Uhm, i can't really give any reasons why you should post it, since i don't know what it'll look like
and what the story of it is,
other than that i am very curious, and i'm sure that plenty of your other watchers
would love to see more like this~

Maybe you should just post it, and use it as an opportunity to learn what the other people think of it?
But that's entirely up to you ofcourse!
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Detrah Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist

LOL hello it took me two months to anwer for some reason.

I will post it, maybe.. the reason why I'm hesitating is because I might want to make it into an actual comic book. ´v` MAYBE.

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Keesness Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hhhh SHIT. me too xD

ahh i see! Then certainly don't upload the rest!
I will for sure buy it ifyou publish it! :la:
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theryo99 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
is the most awsomest comic i'm ever read it's only have 10 pages but so freakin awsome i love it so much  TuT
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Detrah Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist

Thank you. ;´v`; You make me so happy. 


This comic is (hopefully) getting a long sequel, too! `v´

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theryo99 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
OuO
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QueenDirtbag Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013
i finally got around to reading this and loved it. it reminds me of the sacrifices that a lot of older cultures used to do that had many of the people thinking that it was a honor to die for their people.
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Detrah Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! Yeah, that's kinda what they have going on, I'm glad it comes through!
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Hollygoesmeow Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I just love the shading on this! It's so cool!
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Detrah Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you!
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uumbrella Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Olipa kiva sarjakuvapätkä ^.^ Tosi hienosti piirretty, ja pelottava tunnelma! Nuo puheet on sopivan lyhyitä, käyvät tarinankulkuun hyvin.   
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Detrah Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Kiitos kaunis. n u n 
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uumbrella Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Eipä mitään ^.^
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Portalpup Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
This comic was wonderful! You must get an A++++ on your projects!!!! I wish I get to do projects like that .3.
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Detrah Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you! We don't get graded on these, but it was well received. `u´ Hopefully they'll like the next bunny comic too. 
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Portalpup Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Your welcome and I hope they do too!
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Jenaiify Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013
Tosi hieno sarjakuva, värimaailma oli nätti. >w< Ja hieno lopetus myös, kiva kun lukija voi itse päättää mitä tapahtuu.. owo Vaikka tilanne näyttää aika pahalta kanin suhteen..
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Detrah Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Joo, ei näytä mahikset kauheen hyviltä..
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HeraTheWolf Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
cool comic, sorta reminds me of the story and moral of one of Aesop's fables "The Hawk and the Pigeons"
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Detrah Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ohhh, how did that story go?
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HeraTheWolf Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Here's a quick short summary of the story: 

A hawk wanted to eat some of these pigeons, but whenever he tried to sneak in for the kill, the pigeons would be able to escape from his grasp. So one day, after several failed attempts, the hawk found the pigeons yet again, but this time perched himself on a tree branch above them. From there he stated how the pigeons lived a life full of constant fear and if they made him king, he would protect them from anything that could threaten them. Once announced being King by the pigeons, the first rule the hawk installed was that the pigeons were to sacrifice one pigeon a day for his appetite, in order for him to protect them from other predators.

That's how it went i believe... search the story on another site (eg) google, and it's an Aesop's fable called "The Hawk and the Pigeons." It's not "The Hawk, Kite, and the Pigeons", because the original title and story from the book i read titled it the hawk and the pigeons. I just love Aesop's fables  


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Detrah Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
WHAT, it's so similar! : D Oh my! 
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HeraTheWolf Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol I kno... but I still like your story because it is interesting and well designed :)
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imke14 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow great comic!
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Detrah Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much!
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Falco-Fan12 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
;A;
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Detrah Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
´~`
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Falco-Fan12 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Its so sad :C
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PantyCATSS Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Did this story have a theme? Like of nobility?
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Detrah Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
The theme we were given was very lenient, something that you could apply to pretty much everything you did. It was "change". :)
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Wolfh15 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013   General Artist
So is it like they are in a group of sorts and for the fox not to kill all of them, they must sacrifice one rabbit per day? 
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Detrah Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yes, just as you said. :)
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Wolfh15 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013   General Artist
sweet ^^
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Vilue Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ihana tyyli, värit luo tosi erikoisen tunnelman tässä! sopivat tosi hyvin :meow: ja avoimet loput on aina jänniä, saa ite miettiä miten tarina voisi jatkua :D
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Detrah Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Kiitos paljon. ´u`
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